The Man in the Brown Castle



The man in the brown castle
Keeps his dwindling hair untidy.

The man in the brown castle
Sits on a lone rocking chair,
Staring at stained walls.

The man in the brown castle
Wears a tired expression
Whilst looking out to the sea.

The man in the brown castle
Only speaks in shadows,
Always refusing to see his own.

The man in the brown castle
Let his mind drift
And sanity wane.

The man in the brown castle
Still waits for his wife
To haunt the foggy meadows
Outside his only window.

About this poem

I based this poem off a painting of a sad looking guy, made with dark brown paint.

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Written on October 02, 2019

Submitted by zerosearch on August 29, 2023

Modified by zerosearch on August 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Ab Axx Axb Acx Axx Axcx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 486
Words 104
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4

Max Rifkin

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  • luisestable1
    Not much going on in this poem; only of man in a brown castle, but not much to it except some minor details which do not make the poem any better but give a curious reading.
    LikeReply8 months ago

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