When I felt free for real
I am who I am today because you helped me see.
That I am worthy and I have a lot of tea.I want you to know that I am forever grateful and Blessed.
But you are the best and better than all the rest.
I need all of you people to know that he is my man and I love him so.
I just wanted to not feel the pain but better yet I got left in the rain
Baby let's make this work for us
But I know we can make them hush
I am for once in my life at peace and feel great at heart
And you have had me from the start.
So I will forever be your feet in the sand but please never let go of my hand.
I need you in my life I can't wait to be your wife
You complete my heart and I can't be shot at like a dart..
About this poem
This poem is based on how I have felt my entire life.
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Written on August 19, 2023
Submitted by Jsummar10 on August 19, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 699 |
Words | 176 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 3, 2 |
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