My Dim Little Light

Claire Deschene 2007 (North Smithfield)



Flickering streetlights…
Shadows dancing
Moon shining
Stars twinkling

And you…

Standing and staring
At the light in me
The dim light that needs
To be brightened
But is slowly fading away

And you…
The light inside you…

 The light is brighter
 Then a thousand suns
 Waiting
 Wanting
 to brighten the world

And you…

 Standing and staring
 Glistening in the moon
 Like an angel that has been brought down
 To bring me joy and brighten

 My Dim Little Light

About this poem

This poem is about how people view themselves compared to that one very special person that they love whether romantically or platonically.

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Written on January 28, 2024

Submitted by clairegenevivedeschene on February 02, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abbb Bxaxx cc xabbx Bxxx x
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 474
Words 90
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 2, 5, 4, 1

Claire Deschene

I grew up in a small town. Where I spent most of my time reading and drawing. I have two adorable dogs. I have lots of hobbies such as reading, writing, soccer, skateboarding, and drawing. more…

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