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Fairy Tale

Amanda K lessig (Sunshine) 1987

All my life I've dreamed of a man who is faithful and true
His love for me would be clear just as the sky is blue
In his arms I would find shelter from any storm
His eyes would show me he would never cause me harm
With him I could never doubt where I belong
Even apart our feelings stay strong
We are what our hearts need
There are no others to compete
Together our love will conquer all
As one our flaws would be proudly shown, standing tall
He will eternally remain my safe place
Constantly planting kisses on my face
For each other we would do anything
Passion has no rules
Inside of him are all my dreams
My mind never stops growing form his seeds
He plants them in my soul with truth
Together we will never lose
A heart as big as mine
Not afraid to shine

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Written on 2022

Submitted by amandak on April 30, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXXBBXXCCDDXXXXXXEE BE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 774
Words 156
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 20, 2
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4 Comments
  • charlesedwardyork
    charlesedwardyork
    I dream of a woman like this. The kisses on the face: I totally dig that!
    LikeReply9 days ago
  • alanswansea18
    alanswansea18
    Take care of my friend at work today thank you.
    LikeReply15 days ago
    • amandak.45897
      amandak.45897
      she is still hanging in there. Thank you and thank you, I do have a soft side lol.
      LikeReply15 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      alanswansea18
      she will be fine with you by her side.
      LikeReply 115 days ago
  • dougb.72572
    dougb.72572
    There is no awkwardness in sustaining rhyme and cadence throughout. The topic of sheltering love is well worth your investment of time emotion paper and ink. This whole package had to be in poetry format. Very good and thanks...Doug Blair. 
    LikeReply 115 days ago
    • amandak.45897
      amandak.45897
      Thank you, your comment has definitely boosted my confidence. You are appreciated :)
      LikeReply15 days ago
  • alanswansea18
    alanswansea18
    This is one beautiful piece of work. I never seen this side of you. I think it's your best.
    LikeReply 116 days ago

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